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Men fashion

Photography Photography \ Uncategorized | 11/11/06 @774 | sami | Comments critiques (9) | Views views (533)


Men fashion
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Ok i am back from hibernation. Actually i am busy in learning Design layout and brand management.

I used a dumby logo just made in 3 minutes. What i wanted to make was, an Ad with emphasis on layout and design. So let me know what do u think of the piece.

The model is Me

 
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Avatar Sven

 11/11/06 @873

I like this....simple shot. Still I would like to see this bigger. and maybe more space around that man. :)
(thumbup)
 
Avatar Madanapale

 11/12/06 @006

Glad to see another work from you.....A little tight at the top....but very nice portrait!......I also wish it would be a little larger.
Carlos
 
Avatar eshine

 11/12/06 @319

The colours rock! As far as layout goes, I think it works very well. I don't really like the fuzzy dark area at the bottom, I think it would look nice and slick without that. Also, I don't know if you have control over this, but the model's (your) pose is not so flattering, I think if your right hand were carrying something like a briefcase or hanging loosely so that the jacket is not disturbed it would flow better. Right now the jacket is not falling properly against your frame because of the hand-in-pocket thing going on and causes a feeling of disarray. The left hand in the pocket seems ok to me because it is more inline with your body. Also, your expression seems sour... not that you need to smile but maybe to have more of a confident and pleasant expression on your face :)

Another nice touch would be to add the contact info (location, website or both) for the business or retailer that you are advertising for. I think a nice place for that to appear would be in the bottom black bar, top left using a light coloured (to match the background of the model) modernish Sans-serif font.

Hope this helps :)
 
Avatar dakoo

 11/12/06 @444

well is there anything one can add to that crit from eshine !!
 
Avatar Dutch-Memory

 11/12/06 @675

Jup, listen to eshine:p!
Good work.
 
Avatar MeAndMyCam

 11/12/06 @832

Nice pic Sam, I like it. I agree about the space around the model.
Good to see you post again (thumbup)
 
Nikto

 11/15/06 @036

I like the idea very much! (thumbup)
 
Avatar NisarAdil

 01/11/07 @324

well i wud say i nice one...but lil bit prob.. wid facial expression
 
kedayshi

 07/16/07 @587

i agree with you nisar he need to "AANKH SAAF KAR " LOLZ nice pic
 
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